5 Nights: Sinful Delights Boxed Set

5 Nights: Sinful Delights Boxed SetEnjoy Five Full Length Stories From Bestselling Author Michelle Hughes In This Great Offer From Tears Of Crimson Publishing Keep A Part Of Crimson History With This Sensual Memento From Her LibraryVirgin Alpha Male Romance This Set Is Sure To Delight Readers Who Like Their Female Leads Innocent And The Men Strong And Dominant There S Nothing Taboo In Five Nights These Men Know What They Want And Have No Problem Showing Their Woman How Much They Ll Enjoy Giving In Full Length Novels Are Waiting For Your Reading Pleasure Find Your Next Book Boyfriend, He S Only A Page AwaySinRomance Book ClubScarlett S TemptationAngela S SalvationUndercover Submissive These stories could have been good but all I can say is thisAN EDITOR IS YOUR FRIENDand if you actually had an editor for these books you need to fire their ass like yesterday I read four of the five tales but could not stomach reading the last one The stories are passable, all involving a virgin and a very rich and or powerful man, usually about 10 years older than the heroine There is usually some sad issue afflicting the heroine and indeed the hero but the redemptive power of love prevails just in time before the book ends Heaven bless repetitious stories as I did not have to pay close attention all the time but still managed to follow the narrative no matter wh I read four of the five tales but could not stomach reading the last one The stories are passable, all involving a virgin and a very rich and or powerful man, usually about 10 years older than the heroine There is usually some sad issue afflicting the heroine and indeed the hero but the redemptive power of love prevails just in time before the book ends Heaven bless repetitious stories as I did not have to pay close attention all the time but still managed to follow the narrative no matter which title I was reading These stories are not meant to be funny but the endless parade of misused words depreciatively for deprecatingly , an institution of hiring learning , an inability to use tenses correctly had went for had gone , many, many typos and calling her characters by the wrong name, led to much hilarity in my household My partner at one point suggested she learned to write in another language as she clearly could not write in English It is lazy writing to inflict such careless work on a reader, especially a paying reader, as bad as a poorly finished garment A spellchecker is a basic requirement but is only useful if the writer wants to get it right.In Michelle Hughes case, she needs a copy editor to turn these pigs ears into something approximating good writing As it is, others have commented previously on her poor writing but she clearly does not care enough to take any pride in her work and have some consideration towards her readers I am really enjoying the stories but I am FRUSTRATED at the editing It s one thing to have grammatical errors or misspellings here and there but they are everywhere and there are multiple places in multiple stories that have name mix ups There werethan a few times I re read a paragraph to make sure I was following correctly I am giving 3.5 stars because of the editing. Both good and bad.There is both good and bad in this book The good At.99, it was worth the read Ms Hughes does a great job developing the characters and the story lines while predictable, were good.The bad Someone needs to find Ms Hughes an editor and a very good thesaurus It was almost irritating reading Jessie girl and make haste over and over and over again The phrasing, misuse of words, and punctuation errors made me cringe I found myself flipping back and forth making sure I Both good and bad.There is both good and bad in this book The good At.99, it was worth the read Ms Hughes does a great job developing the characters and the story lines while predictable, were good.The bad Someone needs to find Ms Hughes an editor and a very good thesaurus It was almost irritating reading Jessie girl and make haste over and over and over again The phrasing, misuse of words, and punctuation errors made me cringe I found myself flipping back and forth making sure I didn t miss something to make the plot make sense For 99., it s a decent read if you can hang in and ignore the goof ups Too many mix upsWhile I found the stories entertaining, at times it was confusing to follow because of the many name mix ups. might have made 3 stars if not for the editing I think this is my first written one star review Based on my personal rating system, I really can t give it a full star The story concepts had promise When the reader gets to the steamy sex scenes, the author knows how to turn up the heat That wasn t the problem Not the story type or genre Here were the three problems I couldn t get past in order to recommend 1 Needs an editor There would be sentences where the sentence starts with a quote for person speaking and then no end quote I I think this is my first written one star review Based on my personal rating system, I really can t give it a full star The story concepts had promise When the reader gets to the steamy sex scenes, the author knows how to turn up the heat That wasn t the problem Not the story type or genre Here were the three problems I couldn t get past in order to recommend 1 Needs an editor There would be sentences where the sentence starts with a quote for person speaking and then no end quote I am by no means the grammar police But this was a consistent error that drove me nuts There are other paragraphs where two characters are speaking but then the one character calls them by another character who isn t present Example When speaking to Cayce, Dylan calls her Cait her twin not present 2 Every single female lead character had some sort of sexual history that was bad, and had fear overcoming it I don t mind this storyline But all five books, I felt like the female lead was just renamed There was nothing unique that set each one of them really apart for me 3 Alternating POV every other paragraph Again, I am okay with alternating POVs At chapter breaks or break within the chapter This was the problem that I had that made me struggle with completing the read Example First paragraph, it s Angela POV, next it s Nolan s, then Rachel the BFF, then next one we are in the Lead Singers head I felt like I was at a tennis match and had no idea where to follow the ball The reading became exhausting Thus why it took me so long to finish I really don t like to write negative reviews and this one I almost just didn t because I couldn t be positive But, if someone follows my shelves, I wanted to make sure they know how I felt about the book There are others who may love this series it s a steal for 833 pages at 99 cents on, but I can t in good conscience recommend Book 1 Sin Never in a million years would I have guessed this to happen This book is simply amazing There is drama, sex, lust, romance, and love all wrapped into one neat little package What a great romance novel Titillating Book 2 Romance Book Club What a romantic story The passion alone is to die for The world of BDSM lightly explained for the curious beginner Provides a provocative tale of, passion, lust, desire, trust, and love.Book 3 Scarlett s Temptation Truly mesmerizing Fun, f Book 1 Sin Never in a million years would I have guessed this to happen This book is simply amazing There is drama, sex, lust, romance, and love all wrapped into one neat little package What a great romance novel Titillating Book 2 Romance Book Club What a romantic story The passion alone is to die for The world of BDSM lightly explained for the curious beginner Provides a provocative tale of, passion, lust, desire, trust, and love.Book 3 Scarlett s Temptation Truly mesmerizing Fun, fun , fun Dungeon play with a full test of one s will Heart pumping, racing, palpitating scenes to make one dream to scram their safe word Talking about pushing and testing one s limits Excellent play time fun Book 4 Angela s Salvation Angela is a beautiful soul trapped in a traumatized mind and body When confronted with her savior she is at a loss for words She is given the change at a lifetime dream at the cost of her reputation Can she found peace, love, and happiness from her Savior The passion that is unleashed is just as traumatic as her past Book 5 Undercover Submissive A short steamy romance about an innocent losing her virginity to the nations most eligible bachelor The only issue is he thinks, initially, she is someone else When he find out, he has a woman he doesn t want to let go For him, it s a struggle, he s never kept anyone Yet she has touched his heart deeply Their lives are mixed in the hopes of rescuing her sister But in the end, their hearts will need rescuing Some were great, some not so much, but there is something for everyone.Even though this collection has a central theme, it is all over the place Sometimes I felt the writing was great, sometimes I had to force myself to continue reading Some of the characters were great, and some were atrocious At 0.99 though it was a good buy You may not love all five of them but the couple that are gems make the purchase worth while. Not my kind of bookOut of the five stories, I only liked book 1 Sin The rest for me are just crap Or maybe I m just not really into pure BDSM with only like one page worth of love story angle to it This is like reading BDSM 101 with no story I most specially hate the 3rd book I forgot counting how many times I called names for both the lead characters I just hated it.